My name is Sara Tirad Mahmoud. I am a journalism student and am still working my around the many different styles of writing, with fiction being one of my favorite subjects.
I liked the picture you posted, and you have good ambience sound, but I think the music at the end and the beginnig was a bit too long, and I am not sure it was very rellevant to the topic... I think you could have paraphrased what you got from your interview and narrate some parts, and maybe add another interview from a costumer and a seller over there. I liked your video, it is informative, don't think I'm trying to focus on the bad sides, I'm just trying to help :p.
Good job Sara. I think you did a good slideshow, but i understand that after being upoloaded we can barely hear what is being said.
ReplyDeletewow Sara your pictures were so clear and nice job with the video.
ReplyDeleteI was barely hearing! I wish you made the audio louder and used a different music!
ReplyDeletebut good information though!
I liked the picture you posted, and you have good ambience sound, but I think the music at the end and the beginnig was a bit too long, and I am not sure it was very rellevant to the topic... I think you could have paraphrased what you got from your interview and narrate some parts, and maybe add another interview from a costumer and a seller over there. I liked your video, it is informative, don't think I'm trying to focus on the bad sides, I'm just trying to help :p.
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